Room 4 heard a lot of noise coming from outside our classroom. We went outside to take a look. They were breaking up the road to try and fix it. We loved watching the machinery doing their jobs. We watched it for a long time.
Here is some of our writing about what we saw.
I like the digger. It was awesome. It was digging the rocks.
By Katelyn
I like watching the digger. It was lifting up the sand.
By Raedence
I like watching the digger. It was loud.
By Maria
I like the digger because it fixes the road.
By Mia
I like the digger and truck. They put the stones on the road.
By Cruz
It was so noisy I had to cover my ears. It was fun.
By Sky
I was watching the roller. It was squashing the road.
By Kayden
I watched the digger dig the road. I watched the roller roll the rocks.
By Noah
The machinery was noisy. It was fixing the road.
By Mathew
Here are a couple of photos of our published writing.
Hi may name is George your lucky to see a digger at your school we have never had a digger at are school before.
ReplyDeleteWhat time did the digger show up? By Aum. Wow your pictures look so good By Nicco. Your writing is really awesome. By Aum. Did you know what the noise was? By Nicco.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you wrote about the road works because I wondered what was happening out there.
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